Aww, thanks! I kinda been afraid it looked too much like swastika. And I gotta say I love bears on tricycles
Seems like we are on the same page then, and I gotta say that I love the visual imagery
It isn't love my character feels. Atleast not "real love". More like a crush, or the feeling like he is supposed to love her for some intangible...
I wouldn't say that I personally consider poetry and beauty to go hand in hand. Because my character doesn't fully grasp why he is so infatuated...
The alarmingly high amount of art comparatives will be lowered, that thing is for sure, and those are some good lines. I might just steal them
It's a good opinion, I give you that, buuuut... the character in question doesn't really look for his past. It is more suggested that Sarah...
Don't worry. I'm not gonna scrap anything yet. Thanks for caring :friend:
Perhaps I should have mention it before, but my story is mostly of a comedic nature and practically non-existent of actual romantic drama. Now...
Good point. I might just do that
Thanks for the kind words. I think I'll tone down the art comparison a bit. It makes it seem like he doesn't really know what he is talking about,...
First of all, I have to say that you guys are all great. This is better feedback that I would have ever hoped for, but I feel like I kinda opened...
I have a bit of a problem. A character in my story is having an inner monologue describing the girl he fancies, but whatever I write about the...
You have a valid point there, Mckk. I will reveal a little more of the plot to try to make some sense out of this. B is murdered because the...
Perhaps I didn't give the idea of blackmailing a through reflection. I really like you suggestions, Lancie, but here comes the but. I think its...
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