I've been sending out query letters for my new YA urban fantasy novel, Henry Rider: Clown Hunter, and I figure I should get some feedback on the...
Here is my synopsis for my book. The book itself is called "Reborn", however it is part of a series I plan to make called "Lost in the Shadows". I...
Hi everyone!! A few of you have been following the progress of Hide, or at least reading me go on about it for the past six months, and it's...
Hello my name is Jack major and I'm the lead writer on a project it's a choose-your-own-adventure novel I'm really passionate about It but I'm...
So I recently came upon this video from an interesting youtube channel called Pop Culture Detective. The video is a critique of a romantic trope...
Ok, so I wrote this just then for a competition I'm entering tomorrow, so critique will mostly come too late for that entry, but I'd still like...
Recently I sent a few chapters of my current WIP to some of the people in the social groups that I'm in and this one person told me that my first...
There are some places, like here, where you can't link to a Google Doc or any external place. You have to paste the text here. Of course, that...
And I don't mean they're wrong about grammar or their observations about the story are wrong. I mean they're factually wrong. For example, I...
Anyone have one? I'm no English major, and I can't tell you about alliteration, or euphemisms, or anything like that. Usually have to look up...
Below is a google doc copy of a story I posted on my blog in 2017. While it is already posted, if the spirit moves me, I can still edit it. I...
I'm relatively new to this forum (four months or so), and have done what I could to provide decent feedback on the pieces I've read here, even...
Hello everyone,i've decided to make this to hopefully recieve any sort of criticism on my writing.Since my main project is under wraps for now,i'm...
So I'm sure we've all been there, We posted our newest handy-dandy piece of writing, our soul was in it and our fingers on fire. We throw it out...
The art of the critique. Lately I've noticed the story critiques have tended towards grammar, spelling, tense correction, and basic language...
I was suggested by someone successful to get a critique partner for my novel and was also told that I need to be careful with getting a critique...
Hey guys, Below is my query letter for FADE TO BLACK. I'd love your opinions on it. Dear xxxxx, Sometimes, a place does not need to be haunted...
This morning I received the feedback for my Novel Beginning entry to this year's Pennwriters contest. I submitted the first 10 pages of the...
Have you ever received somewhat of a critique or criticism after publication? I'm not talking about reviews, more like people you know or know...
This has probably been said in the forums a hundred times, but new members still have doubts whether it's OK to tell us clearly when they don't...
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