Here's a little random scene I wrote for my characters and their interaction. Feel free to critique anything, especially dialogue. I am definitely...
So I posted an earlier version of this and after some advice, I made some changes. What do you guys think? Initial crime: Takes place fourteen...
Any feedback is appreciated! Every High King selects Keepers to protect him… however this King chose ones that secretly want him dead....
MC wakes up in another reality. I’d like to mention this is not the FIRST way of opening. This is the inciting incident but I’d think happened...
Upon enquiring as to whether this could become a sub-forum of sorts, I thought I'd post the cover of a story I wish to self-publish, in a very...
I'm writing a thriller and I'm only publishing online on a website. I made the cover myself because where I normally got them from was recently...
I've looked around and not seen something like this, nor am I sure if this is something that is allowed. However, I think it would be useful to...
I'm looking to start this thread as a motivator for myself to read more stories in the workshop. And as a way for people to perhaps advertise...
Before my 90 days membership? Just wanting to cut my teeth and help someone out if they have a first chapter or a short story. Or is that not...
We’ve frequently discussed here how to deal with bad feedback from beta readers. But now that my first novel is published I feel this is a...
Hey, so, I need another pair of eyes on this. The plot is that near a port town there's this island where (supposedly) a witch lives. She calls...
So I've been back, and trying to deal with the critique backlog since I finally got some free time. So I have some questions. Frankly speaking,...
I am new to this forum. even though i've written literally hundreds of pages of material, I've never let anyone see any of it. The time has come...
Recently I thought about post my writing to get some critique, and it's to my understanding that most places out there are required one to give...
I'm honestly not sure if this is the right place to post this. It's going to be a novel someday, but right now I'm just looking for critique on...
I can't seem to make dialogue and action more interesting and descriptive! Emphasis on the latter. It just seems flat and without real character....
***REVISED VERSION FURTHER DOWN THE THREAD*** I'd love to get any input about my query letter. It's already around the standard accepted length,...
Greetings peeps. I'm writing a trilogy about a very distinctive serial killer and this is the first cover I designed of said trilogy. Most people...
Dear Agent, I am seeking representation for my contemporary YA novel, THE SEPTEMBER GURL, which is complete at 72,000 words and draws inspiration...
[IMG] I've spent the last few days putting together my world map and I think I've gotten it done pretty good. I've been studying things like...
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