Hello. I'm trying to describe a situation in which a woman is trying to get with a boy in a night club. She goes to the restroom and applies...
A lot of times, I write sentences like this: "I saw a flash of uncertainty cross his eyes." This gets confusing when I'm doing it for my half...
I have decided to create a Private Eve series that has a mix of Peter Gunn and Sleepy Hollow. I want to make my characters unique and not...
One of my characters goes blind in one eye from a car crash. I would like to know what could've exactly happened to him to cause his blindness....
Okay, so not exactly a problem. But I am curious what you guys would think. So my work is fantasy, urban fantasy and I have a character with a...
Got you! Hello everyone, my name is Daniel. I am a 19 years of age freshman in college. I was browsing the internet for a forum with weekly...
I'm trying to find the narrative I want for my story. How my story is set up is it scene switches between two people. I'd like to do 3rd person...
So, I have this think that I see grain when it becomes darker. Not floaters but a clear uncontrolled grain effect. When I close my eyes some of it...
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