How do you guys feel about one letter names? For example, if one of my characters had a V-shaped birthmark and I wanted to name him V? It makes...
I think I'm about ready to start querying Henry Rider: Clown Hunter again. How does this letter sound? Dear [agent], Fifteen year old Henrietta...
Hi everyone! I'm so exicted to become part of this wonderful online community. I'd really appreciate it if anyone could give me some feedback on...
I've been sending out query letters for my new YA urban fantasy novel, Henry Rider: Clown Hunter, and I figure I should get some feedback on the...
Dear Agent Mabel was always the shy type always minding his own business and not fighting against his enemies back in Luna City but there came...
Hi there, New on the forum. So I've started sending out a few short stories to online journals with a query letter attached. I sent one this...
I'm preparing to write a query letter, but I'm unsure of what to include in terms of information on contacting me if an agent decides they want...
Mine was a couple of months ago.
Hello, I'm new here. Nice to meet you :) I'm currently on my third draft of a novel and there's been an issue that has vexed me a lot even though...
Ok gang, I am new to this- I have written two books and the second, I think I want give it a go. It is a supernatural thriller. Is this a decent...
Hey guys, Below is my query letter for FADE TO BLACK. I'd love your opinions on it. Dear xxxxx, Sometimes, a place does not need to be haunted...
To write by hand, I mean. Like most people I'm dissatisfied with my hand-writing in general - I dread writing greeting cards because of how ugly...
What do you think? A fear-driven Mennonite woman takes refuge in marriage, but finds herself navigating rough waters in my 75,000-word mainstream...
Hi All, I'm looking for some insight. I'm finding it difficult deciding on how to incorporate dialogue within the retelling of events within a...
Hello! It's been a while since I've taken a look at my query. It received good responses from the other writing forum I visit, but when I queried...
I previously sent some queries for Tredecim, but am pausing to regroup. This novel is complex and boiling it down has been quite the challenge....
The question is pretty much as the title says. I've got a bit of dialog where someone is crying and stumbling and nervously running their words...
Dear Agent, Twelve-year-old Caro is a self-hating introvert with a penchant for Latin. It's a life that's worked out pretty well for her if you...
I noticed you guys give pretty thoughtful advice in here, so I thought I'd ask for help. Help! :) I sent out a few queries the other day. I want...
Hi all, I'm looking for something stronger than "sincerely" to end a letter with. The usual "warm regards" and "sincerely" or "yours sincerely"...
Separate names with a comma.
