I have the general issue of beginning, well, anything. No matter how much I want to do something and how many great ideas I have, it's the opening...
Below is my opening paragraph of my new book. Tell me if that last sentence is awkward. Should I insert another word between "and" and "steep?"...
('Never' isn't an acceptable answer, btw.) So, I kiiind of knew that beginning a novel with someone waking up was cliche. I quickly confirmed...
Separate names with a comma.
