I figured we could use a special thread just for those of us in query on a novel. Not to take anything away from those out there getting rejected...
Rewritten version lower down in the thread! So, bypassing all the Dear Agent blah blah, below is the bit about the book that will go into the...
Ok gang, I am new to this- I have written two books and the second, I think I want give it a go. It is a supernatural thriller. Is this a decent...
Any advice on my query would greatly appreciated. There’s Nothing Funny about being Haunted introduces 12-year-old Henry Davenport. Writing a...
Hey guys, Looking for your awesome opinions on another query letter. Any thoughts are MUCH appreciated! I am writing today to seek...
Hey guys, Below is my query letter for FADE TO BLACK. I'd love your opinions on it. Dear xxxxx, Sometimes, a place does not need to be haunted...
What do you think? A fear-driven Mennonite woman takes refuge in marriage, but finds herself navigating rough waters in my 75,000-word mainstream...
Hi, I'm hoping to get some feedback on my picture book query. All honest feedback appreciated. Thank you! Dear Ms. _____________, I am...
Hello! It's been a while since I've taken a look at my query. It received good responses from the other writing forum I visit, but when I queried...
Maggie Dawson is undecided about everything. Her major, career, even boyfriend—expected when she’s an abusive narcissist for a mother. Everything...
This is my first attempt at a query. Paragraphs 1 and 6 are meant for one particular agent. I would like to know if they're appropriate of if I...
I previously sent some queries for Tredecim, but am pausing to regroup. This novel is complex and boiling it down has been quite the challenge....
I haven't done this in a while Dear Agent I’m seeking representation for Moonlight Falls, a 92,000-word historical fiction, written in first...
I wasn't too sure where to put this, so I thought I'd just stick it here. (Sorry.) I'm trying to prepare another batch of agent queries, and I...
First things first. Thanks to @Tenderiser for all the help and support. This is the first shot at this. I am ready to have it pulled to bits....
I have an MS that is about as good as I can get it. My plan is to query agents rather than publishers. Now I know, with the best will in the...
This is my query letter, with a little space to add how I found the agent or something. Dear Agent, Not once in his life has Finch Vigo felt...
So I thought I knew what those terms meant, but I'm rather new to all this and thought I should clarify. Are these terms used to determine...
I am providing the first two paragraphs of my query for my PB, Squeak Feels Weak. I have omitted the bio paragraph because for now I want to...
Dear Agent, Twelve-year-old Caro is a self-hating introvert with a penchant for Latin. It's a life that's worked out pretty well for her if you...
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