Dear Agent, This tale begins with a miscarriage, and the young boy who sailed across the stars to save her. Having lost his grandparents a...
Dear (Agent Name), Knights aren’t as chivalrous as shown in children’s storybooks. At first glance, Tymeria is a kingdom of beautiful wineries,...
I would appreciate some insight on my query. I have included a question at the bottom as I'm getting mixed reviews as to whether I should include...
Dear Agent, I am seeking representation for my contemporary YA novel, THE SEPTEMBER GURL, which is complete at 72,000 words and draws inspiration...
I've scoured the ends of every horizon and cannot find for the life of me either standard formatting for a query letter, nor commonly requested...
This is my first try at this one, so let me know what you think: Since Mackenzie’s parents work for a worldwide relief foundation, at twelve she...
Basically, writing an absurdist/humorous sci-fi book, inspired by writers like Douglas Adams and Johnathan Cleese. I'm still in the writing...
I've been sending out query letters for my new YA urban fantasy novel, Henry Rider: Clown Hunter, and I figure I should get some feedback on the...
Hi everyone. I've been working on this query for a month now and I'd appreciate any insights you offer. Thanks! Dear ***** A serial murder case...
I have several picture books in the works, and I'm very close to final draft status, or at least almost beta-ready, on at least two of them. I...
Any advice/corrections/comments on the query letter below would be greatly appreciated. What do you suggest in order to make this query more...
I wrote a screen play adaption for one of my books. In my query letter I send out to agent/agencies/publishers, do you think it is beneficial or...
Hi everyone!! A few of you have been following the progress of Hide, or at least reading me go on about it for the past six months, and it's...
I had reservations about submitting this, so be gentle with me. I had to take off my writers hat to write this. Query writing is...
Dear Agent Mabel was always the shy type always minding his own business and not fighting against his enemies back in Luna City but there came...
Dear Agent: Tender, an android with a fascination for classical music, lives a harmonious, ordered existence. His sole purpose: to care for the...
Two Lifetimes is exactly what the title says: The story of two very different people told from their own unique perspectives. Both were born...
Hi there, New on the forum. So I've started sending out a few short stories to online journals with a query letter attached. I sent one this...
Edit: I wasn’t clear enough—the following query isn’t for a real book. It’s just a style of query letter I’m thinking about. “The Elven Sword of...
Dear [Agent Name], All DEADLY wants is to survive. But that is what all the other Razs living in the Forgotten Lands, arid and infertile deserts,...
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