Rewritten version lower down in the thread! So, bypassing all the Dear Agent blah blah, below is the bit about the book that will go into the...
Ok gang, I am new to this- I have written two books and the second, I think I want give it a go. It is a supernatural thriller. Is this a decent...
Any advice on my query would greatly appreciated. There’s Nothing Funny about being Haunted introduces 12-year-old Henry Davenport. Writing a...
Hey guys, Looking for your awesome opinions on another query letter. Any thoughts are MUCH appreciated! I am writing today to seek...
Hey guys, Below is my query letter for FADE TO BLACK. I'd love your opinions on it. Dear xxxxx, Sometimes, a place does not need to be haunted...
What do you think? A fear-driven Mennonite woman takes refuge in marriage, but finds herself navigating rough waters in my 75,000-word mainstream...
Hi, I'm hoping to get some feedback on my picture book query. All honest feedback appreciated. Thank you! Dear Ms. _____________, I am...
Hello! It's been a while since I've taken a look at my query. It received good responses from the other writing forum I visit, but when I queried...
Maggie Dawson is undecided about everything. Her major, career, even boyfriend—expected when she’s an abusive narcissist for a mother. Everything...
This is my first attempt at a query. Paragraphs 1 and 6 are meant for one particular agent. I would like to know if they're appropriate of if I...
I previously sent some queries for Tredecim, but am pausing to regroup. This novel is complex and boiling it down has been quite the challenge....
I haven't done this in a while Dear Agent I’m seeking representation for Moonlight Falls, a 92,000-word historical fiction, written in first...
I wasn't too sure where to put this, so I thought I'd just stick it here. (Sorry.) I'm trying to prepare another batch of agent queries, and I...
First things first. Thanks to @Tenderiser for all the help and support. This is the first shot at this. I am ready to have it pulled to bits....
I have an MS that is about as good as I can get it. My plan is to query agents rather than publishers. Now I know, with the best will in the...
This is my query letter, with a little space to add how I found the agent or something. Dear Agent, Not once in his life has Finch Vigo felt...
So I thought I knew what those terms meant, but I'm rather new to all this and thought I should clarify. Are these terms used to determine...
I am providing the first two paragraphs of my query for my PB, Squeak Feels Weak. I have omitted the bio paragraph because for now I want to...
Dear Agent, Twelve-year-old Caro is a self-hating introvert with a penchant for Latin. It's a life that's worked out pretty well for her if you...
Hi, everyone! I've spent many more hours than I care to admit writing a query to send off to agents. To do this, I've been looking at loads of...
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