I am trying to get this query letter right I would really appreciate some feedback. This is what I have so far. Is it too lean, too much like a...
I am trying to get this query letter right I would really appreciate some feedback. I introduce Moonbeam. A contemporary crime novel complete at...
I've followed the back/forth on here re: whether to use a pen name, but I've already decided to do so for various reasons. For those that are...
Anyone here use WordPress for a blog? I use it, hosted by Bluehost. That's the end of my technical knowledge. there is a dashboard that...
Hi all, I would appreciate some sincere feedback on my query letter. I have crafted it based on all sorts of templates I have seen and tweaked it...
OK, how does this sound? John always longed for adventure. That’s why he ran away from his grand but dull home to savor life on the open sea in...
I think I'm about ready to start querying Henry Rider: Clown Hunter again. How does this letter sound? Dear [agent], Fifteen year old Henrietta...
Hi everyone! I'm so exicted to become part of this wonderful online community. I'd really appreciate it if anyone could give me some feedback on...
Hey everyone! I'm stoked to be a part of this great forum full of so many knowledgeable people. I've been slaving away at this query letter for my...
Hey everyone, I'd love some thoughts on my query. Thank you in advance. Dear Agent, (Personalise) I’ve been known by many names,...
Hi all, this is my query so far for my new MG novel. I figured it was at a stage to receive criticism to let me know if I'm on the right track....
Several months ago, I sent out some query letters for my book Henry Rider: Clown Hunter. Since then, I became unsatisfied with the final battle...
Dear Agent, This tale begins with a miscarriage, and the young boy who sailed across the stars to save her. Having lost his grandparents a...
Dear (Agent Name), Knights aren’t as chivalrous as shown in children’s storybooks. At first glance, Tymeria is a kingdom of beautiful wineries,...
I would appreciate some insight on my query. I have included a question at the bottom as I'm getting mixed reviews as to whether I should include...
Dear Agent, I am seeking representation for my contemporary YA novel, THE SEPTEMBER GURL, which is complete at 72,000 words and draws inspiration...
I've scoured the ends of every horizon and cannot find for the life of me either standard formatting for a query letter, nor commonly requested...
This is my first try at this one, so let me know what you think: Since Mackenzie’s parents work for a worldwide relief foundation, at twelve she...
Basically, writing an absurdist/humorous sci-fi book, inspired by writers like Douglas Adams and Johnathan Cleese. I'm still in the writing...
I've been sending out query letters for my new YA urban fantasy novel, Henry Rider: Clown Hunter, and I figure I should get some feedback on the...
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