Hey all, while querying an agent from Ayesha Pande literary, I got to the part in their online form where they ask to describe the project. This...
Hi guys. I want to know if my query has a fluid writing and if the story sounds interesting. I would also like to know if the plot is clear and...
I am new to Writing Forums. Below is my query letter. I would appreciate any and all feedback. Dear Literary Agent, I’m hoping that you will...
Hi everyone! I've been working on this query for a little while and I'm just looking for some feedback. It's a fun rom-com and I want it to come...
I'm submitting to an agent who uses querymanager.com, which uses required fields instead of allowing one letter to cover all the bases, thereby...
Any feedback is appreciated! Every High King selects Keepers to protect him… however this King chose ones that secretly want him dead....
Please scroll to the end of the thread to see the most recent edit. I am trying to get this query letter right I would really appreciate some...
I am trying to get this query letter right I would really appreciate some feedback. I introduce Moonbeam. A contemporary crime novel complete at...
I've followed the back/forth on here re: whether to use a pen name, but I've already decided to do so for various reasons. For those that are...
Anyone here use WordPress for a blog? I use it, hosted by Bluehost. That's the end of my technical knowledge. there is a dashboard that...
Hi all, I would appreciate some sincere feedback on my query letter. I have crafted it based on all sorts of templates I have seen and tweaked it...
OK, how does this sound? John always longed for adventure. That’s why he ran away from his grand but dull home to savor life on the open sea in...
I think I'm about ready to start querying Henry Rider: Clown Hunter again. How does this letter sound? Dear [agent], Fifteen year old Henrietta...
Hi everyone! I'm so exicted to become part of this wonderful online community. I'd really appreciate it if anyone could give me some feedback on...
Hey everyone! I'm stoked to be a part of this great forum full of so many knowledgeable people. I've been slaving away at this query letter for my...
Hey everyone, I'd love some thoughts on my query. Thank you in advance. Dear Agent, (Personalise) I’ve been known by many names,...
Hi all, this is my query so far for my new MG novel. I figured it was at a stage to receive criticism to let me know if I'm on the right track....
Several months ago, I sent out some query letters for my book Henry Rider: Clown Hunter. Since then, I became unsatisfied with the final battle...
Dear Agent, This tale begins with a miscarriage, and the young boy who sailed across the stars to save her. Having lost his grandparents a...
Dear (Agent Name), Knights aren’t as chivalrous as shown in children’s storybooks. At first glance, Tymeria is a kingdom of beautiful wineries,...
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