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  1. Ashley Bird
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    Want to be subtle

    Hi, I've just finished a 1st draft of a short story and I'm not happy with it. I'll give a quick rundown of the story and explain what I'm having...
    Thread by: Ashley Bird, Jan 24, 2018, 13 replies, in forum: Plot Development
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