I have a great new idea for a new story. It is sort of inspired by a new movie called Inception. Here is what I have so far. Please please PLEASE ctitique and give all the suggestions you can!!! The Powerful Mind Characters Blake: Dark haired (short), muscular, handsome, daring, clever Elizabeth (Liz): Tough girl, short dark tied up hair, short Ethan: Smart, nerdy, dirty blonde (wavy), tall thin, genius Max: A thinker, brown hair (short), muscular, A group of people discover a new technology that puts them asleep and puts them into a dream state. In their dreams they can literally find out anything they want. The only catch is that the ideas don’t come to them that easy. Each idea they want to know is given to them in their dream in a state that isn’t solved. It is up to them to solve the puzzles and figure out the answers to all the questions in life. Of course there are problems with this technology. The longer you stay in this dream state, the better chance of you not waking up. These dreams can kill you. If you stay in the dreams too long, whatever happens in the dreams happen to your real life body. These people will have to choose to risk their lives, or find out life’s mysteries.