Okay - I only tried to do a game once before w. terrible results - but based on the "tavern" conversation in rhyme that was inspired yesterday by Wrey - here goes. You submit two rhyming couplets - one that comments on the previous submission - and a new one from you regarding what happened to you - or will happen - or you would like to happen. For example, I might submit: An overnight last night with all the kids home Meant that this morning the hot water is gone So your first entry would be a respons to that. Perhaps: Sorry to hear showers are cold But must be nice to have kids back in the fold And then you would add a couplet of your own: The morning is flying – it just go, go, go, goes How long it will take me to fix my plethora of typo’s (this last couplet you should comment on) SO - in short - FOUR LINES: two commenting on previous entry; and two about your day. Would appreciate comments on if this game sounds like fun.
Typos to spare and run-ons for days. A giddy affair, the error of our ways. The cable is fixed and I get to see movies, with zombies and monsters and occasional boobies. (tee hee!)
Ahh entertainment with pleasures most guilty We've come such a long way from black and white Uncle Miltie To my 20 year old son he'll get no more nice At 1:30 still in bed - means a bucket of ice (Wrey - you are just great! Excellent.)
Nothing enhances the tube like a high-definitional boob I'm relaxing with a book here today in quite a self indulgent way (too slow - but I ain't changing it!)
Fat but content is the man Who slacks off whenever he can Soon I shall go back to Uni Drinking enough to shame Booney (Australian references go go go!)
If Nacki had been French I would have understood if he wrote poodle But since he's an Aussie I the word "Booney" I had to google The Saints game against the Vikings Will us Wisconsin's looking for Farve sightings
Doug J you make me sound tacky My name is Nackl, it's not Nacki And for science nerds, classically four-eyed it's not pronounced 'sodium chloride'
Though a sighting of Farve may leave one goose-bumbin', the thrill of the game is really what's jumpin'! The day has broke grey, cool, and sublime. A rarity here in Caribbean climes. *too slow on the draw, Wrey.* Sodium Chloride may leave one with thirst, but its just a game, so laugh and have mirth.
I'll pass on the ice warriors chasing a puck It's not that it's bad, I just don't give a -- damn For my part I've spent some time editing my novel while watching science fiction DVDs in my hovel
Editing can be tedious Fix only the most egregious Worked like a dog today, yet, still behind at work big time Need an ice cold Corona with a nice wedge of lime
Toil and sweat, the grind won't end Beer makes it better, til we ascend Surfing the net, at work and bored being fired if caught is the only reward
Be careful of that electronic surfing You never know if your boss is lurking Had a fun day, which was kind of suprising Didn't get slugged due to my sharp-tongued advising
Beer might help at the end of the day might be even better to take the dog out to play House is getting painted, but it looks too pink walked in and saw it, and my spirits did sink
Pink is a color of some fish house colored pink? i would not want to wish here i must end this charade for the time has come for some aid (EXAMS!!!)
Tests surprise us every day It's part of life we must needs play Today the air was unseasonably warm I took advantage, before the next storm.
It is winter, snow must fall temperatures drop to the annoyance of all Hun said "no baby" so I'm in a bad mood alone at the office, I'll sit here and brood.
That jerk said No? Let me express that all of us, would have said YES! I farted real bad, cropdusted the wife And now I'm hiding, in fear of my life
She might hurt me, she has a mean punch I think I'll stay hidden 'till after my lunch One more blow, my bad day is double Sis can't have lunch, she has car trouble.
Your days do not get better Though soon it will not matter More exams, are the name of the game The game of which is my very own shame
Exams and tests are not fun, son But by now your brain weighs one ton So much to do, so much to do my head will blow up When I was a student why'd I ever want to grow up?
Growing up might totally suck At least it legal if you want to f... (you can supply the word) Feeling stressed, like a panic attack and I still have rehearsal in Sac
After sweating through rehearsal all day I suggest a bath to wash the stress away. today like yesterday was a bit of a bore new town, no school. no friends visit anymore
A new town, no friends, total suck You'll find some with time and luck Dealing with my insurance has me pissed Treat me like crap, I'm feeling dissed
The insurance game is a web filled with tangles They get you, and pin you, and (bleep) you from all angles. My head is still spinning from pill overload May the day end quickly before it explodes.
Drugs take up a lot of wealth And they're damaging for the health. Aliens are taking over Oh crap they've taken Dover.