I wrote this sentence and realized that it could be one of two things; acceptable or absolutely terrible. How do you all feel about it? I'll include the one before it for a tiny bit more fluidity. "He was born with hunting in his veins. That blood would not let him down, but rather seemed to spark his appetite for the chase, it fed him with the moment of decision and let him drink in the kill." I'm leaning on the side of overkill.