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  1. Jack The Ripper

    Jack The Ripper Banned

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    A New Poem

    Discussion in 'Writing Prompts' started by Jack The Ripper, Jan 1, 2007.

    OK Each person adds one line to the poem.

    I'll start.


    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
     
  2. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
     
  3. Jack The Ripper

    Jack The Ripper Banned

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
     
  4. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
     
  5. Frost

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
     
  6. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.
     
  7. Jack The Ripper

    Jack The Ripper Banned

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
     
  8. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
     
  9. ariella

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
     
  10. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
     
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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
     
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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
     
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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
     
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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
     
  15. Night Haunter

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls
     
  16. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
     
  17. Torana

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
    Never again seen
     
  18. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
    Never again seen
    leaving only ghosts
     
  19. Torana

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
    Never again seen
    leaving only ghosts
    And shadows creeping through the night
     
  20. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
    Never again seen
    leaving only ghosts
    And shadows creeping through the night
    leaving a shroud of darkness
     
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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
    Never again seen
    leaving only ghosts
    And shadows creeping through the night
    leaving a shroud of darkness

    Crystal teardrops floading vacant streets
     
  22. Raven

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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
    Never again seen
    leaving only ghosts
    And shadows creeping through the night
    leaving a shroud of darkness

    Crystal teardrops floading vacant streets
    Under dusk skies with windy howls
     
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    Jacky O Ripper has a clean gouger.
    Though he's neat and Ready as the Night is long.
    As the day is old
    Jacky Sets Out
    Looking Out For Whats Right
    Stumbling and falling through the garden paths;
    CLearing his sights for this night.

    Jacky O Ripper cleans his blade
    Ready for a slicing
    and a dicing
    The victims are never to know
    As if By stealth they are taken
    Never again the light will they see
    As jacky nippers
    Through the dark streets he stalks
    Soon to be taken into the next life
    Yet forever trapped in the eternal darkness
    That drowns our souls

    Forever More
    Never again seen
    leaving only ghosts
    And shadows creeping through the night
    leaving a shroud of darkness

    Crystal teardrops floading vacant streets
    Under dusk skies with windy howls
    Comes the new night again
     

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