No not the song silly! My issue with any of my writing tends to be my need to be organized. By this, I mean I want the reader to kinda know what I'm thinking before I even think it... but that needs to be broken probably. I'm too organized with my writing, that shall break in time hopefully. Anyhow, on to the real problem... I have created a world that I wish my books to be based on. However, I have a lack of ideas to demonstrate this fact. On top of that, I'm still bouncing around the history of this world because I just can't decide. Here is how I have it now: Waaaay back in the Middle Ages, one of the popes was about to take a stand when he was assassinated (it appears as if he died of natural causes) and in a coincidental vote, his brother instead took the stand. A few months into his 'term' so to speak, and strange things begin to occur, not only in Italy it seems. Well the Pope is then contacted by an outside force (God) who tells him that since Lucifer cannot have the real Earth, he has decided to fight for this one instead (the parallel Earth). Anyhow, under commands from this outside force (trying not to offend anyone who is not a Christian here) the Pope rallies the forces of England, France, Spain ect ect. Even going so far at to head to the Americas, and obtain alliance from the Aztecs, Myans, Natives. So basically everyone (of course the outside force has to help in the convincing). Anywho, a huge force is established, and everyone takes hold in a massive fortress that can house just about everyone (with the help of some underground tunnels and of course a little Divine magic), just as the decent of the evil outside force begins to take hold on the parallel earth. A huge war ensues. (What a shocker) After the battle, which is narrowly won, the energies of the demons and of the outside forces seem to resonate in the atmosphere. The Pope then becomes known as Father Time, destined to protect the earth along with Mother Nature, and the entire council of elders (this includes Guardians of Earth, Wind, Fire, Water, Animals ect. Just use your imagination here because I don't have them all set in stone yet) as well as a many lower councils. Through this also, the energy in the atmosphere is taken in by some people and not by others. This random pattern actually creates new species such as Centaur, Orcs, Elves, and even goes so far as to mutate animals so that some of them can talk, not all of them, but some. Well anyhow, this whole land is just based off of that, the parallel earth is actually double the size of the real earth (triple if I find that I can't fit all my wanted locations in there) but the point is its big! That is the premises... but along with my issue of how to introduce all this, I also fear of insulting people. You see, the lower councils are each going to be based on an old belief. For instance, one council can be the council of the ancient Greeks, in this many of the deities from the Greek religion take seat here (obviously these were people chosen by Father Time and what not after the great war). The other lower councils include deities from Inuit mythology, Viking Mythology, ect ect. I mean, you get the idea. Of course I won't venture so far as to include Deities from the Major religions of today (Christian, Muslim, Jewish, Hindu, and Buddhist) for the sake of insulting people. Yet, I'm still worried I might inadvertently insult some... Any help?