So far I have written two stories (that I hope to publish on this forum one day) and in the both I had the same problem. In a scene where a lot of characters move and interact I am having trouble explaining that. I mean had some pretty neat action sequences in my had but just can't bring portray them without getting into tedious explanation. That especially bugs me when I want to write a hand to hand combat between characters. When is to detailed and tedious, how not to break the momentum of the sequence, those are my woes. And then you have simple character interaction, I admit that it was incredibly difficult (at least more then I expected) for me to simply describe : Where the characters are, in what kind of confined space are they and where are the other objects in the room. So any thoughts ?