Hi all, I've always loved reading and been fascinated by good storytelling - so decided to have a go at writing one myself. So I've joined to learn some basics, important info and anything else that can help the process. I've got a story in mind which I've recently began to write. I'm one chapter in (although it's a chapter that will sit somewhere in the middle of the book), any takers to have a read? I'm mostly interested to know if it writes and flows well, paints a vivid picture, tells the story of the chapter and anything else of significance to you. Any takers? Or is there somewhere specific on this forum to post/request? Many thanks in advance ladies and gents.