I was thinking about stuff I should write on this site. You guys are quite lucky, there is lots of stuff (a tribute to my crush, a romance story, and an excerpt from my drama novel among them) that you will all get to read and hopefully enjoy. But for now, I want to do a "fictional" bit based on the issue explored in "Fourteen Seconds" (my only work on this site). My problem is getting the reader emotionally invested in my character. She's likable enough and the plot is decent. But I want this to be good. I want this to be better than good. I want YOU to remember it. So, how do I do that?