Here is another of my garbage intros to a chapter. Any suggestions for improving it? Basically what is happening: A stolen space ship is landed on a beach (with purple sand). The space cops are there to search it. It's evening on this part of the planet, and there is a storm brewing (such storms are common in this season on this particular world). The smuggled shipping vessel sat on the beach some fifteen miles across the inlet from the Long Dock Mining Facility. Commander Driscoll Cannon stood on purple-colored sand a few feet away from it, the coastal wind pelting him with cool, salty air. In the red sky above, thunderclouds gathered in prelude to another one of the cyclones common in this part of the colonial world of Juno.