I really think my beginings to sentances/paragraphs arn't very good. Here is an extract from what I'm writing with the real names changed: Opening the door of Garry's room, she stepped out and looked around the hall to see if anyone was there. There wasn’t. She turned around and closed the door quietly as to not wake anyone from sleep. As she turned around to walk to her own room, there, right in front of her, was Jen. Is this good, acceptable or just plain rubbish?