Bare bones or Over descriptive - which writer are you?

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  1. ChaosReigns

    ChaosReigns Ov The Left Hand Path Contributor

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    it depends on what exactly it is i am describing as to how it is for me
     
  2. hippocampus

    hippocampus Active Member

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    Well, I think I'd know what to cut in the same way you think I should know what to add! o_O

    Seriously though - I wouldn't be worried if I were only 5000 words away. It's being 45,000 words away that worries me.
     
  3. mg357

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    It depends on the subject i am writing so i guess you could say i am both.
     
  4. Wild Knight

    Wild Knight Senior Member

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    I overwrite. I just can't help it. Then I thin it all out after I spend some time away from it. I tried writing bare bones... it doesn't really work for me.
     
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    I'm over-descriptive. I don't get flowery or complicated about it, I just put in waaaaaaaaaaay too much. Was able to keep descriptions at a minimum in my book, but only insofar as I avoided unnecessary world-building. So yeah, I tend to run off at the mouth.
     
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    Over descriptive on my end. I have a strange tendency to believe that anyone I ask to read for me has a brain of fried tripe so generally I have the urge to keep explaining things
     
  7. wolfenburg

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    I can't stand over descriptive writing. That kind of writing was okay fifty or a hundred years ago when people wanted a picture painted in their head. Now a days there are pictures everywhere and we know what everything looks like thanks to the internet. I try to put only what the reader needs to get a picture in their head, and I only describe whats important. I let their imagination do the rest.
     
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    mammamaia nit-picker-in-chief Contributor

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    over-describing or too much of anything is never a good thing...

    nor is giving the reader too little information...

    so i do neither, though i probably tend more toward the 'lean and clean' side while not stinting on imagery that will draw the readers into the scene without boring them by micromanaging [what i call BIBO writing, as in 'breathe-in/breathe-out]...
     

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