Hello Everyone! I am new to the site, still learning the way this one works so bear with me please? I would like some advice on for a story that I am working on and will be grateful to any help provided. The story is about two people (male/female) who are brought together under mystical circumstances and falling in love is one of the ultimate factors in the story. There comes a point in the story where the female character leaves her home to be with her L.I. for a visit in a strange country. But, upon arrival she learns that the man kept an important object to her in his possession. When she finds out this causes turmoil (ultimately driving them apart temporarily). The man learns upon her arrival that his father is married to someone from her past (His step mother was at one point involved with females widowed father and left because her inability to handle taking care of his daughter). Although they aren't related in anyway or even step siblings, the fact needs to bother him enough that it causes him to pull away. I am still fleshing the story out and I am widely open to suggestions. Help?