TA DA Hello everyone. I did a year and a half of English Lang/Lit at A Level, got touted as being "Good" and then decided to work in factories for a bit. Now, thankfully, im much better off and unemployed, so I thought while dazing at the internet I might as well keep the noggin pumping. Also I knocked this together- On Follies and the methodical Organising of people. If, If. If the one-handed tool can lever, Nay, decieve one user to two-handed fevour, It follows in justice, one hand in the bush, One step to take all tools to beat her. One year---one hundred, all take their toil 'Pon one man and his household, one Man and a fetid, raven desire Purely a human desire Design One God, Mans Dog, One Man Peering upon, standing upon all others shoulders. Lever away; Mans hand from the tool An apple a day, a sense for the fool Five billion freedoms. Docked in Gods court Adjourn not, the Woman, shes free when, She's caught. If, If; if. God is divine, and the language of Gospel gospel sparks from Within:- Then the Man and his Bible, and his Dog, sin the Origional Sin. Hows that for starters?
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Aye, I got a bit ahead of myself. But ive made amends with the mandatory two reviews, albet a little skimpy and lacking in technical nous, but I promise promise promise to do do more after tonight, or this morning
