Hi, I was wondering if I could have your input of this section? I am having trouble explaining what is happening, I want to make it sound serious but instead the whole scenario seem silly. To know what is going on I have to explain a few things; There are three people that travel with each other. Fendrael, Henry and Corey. Fendrael has a power that makes him super fast and strong. Because of this he can see things much faster than anyone else and thus for the reader it would seem like slow motion. However, his power only happens when he is extremely angry or afraid. Also, his power is limited by his stamina. When it runs out he collapses from fatigue. Another thing that need an explanation is that he posses an item that makes him able to summon a sword that is able to cut through almost anything. Think of conjuration magic from Skyrim. So with that explained, enjoy! “Yeah well, at least the trip has ben de-void of danger so far,” as Henry finishes his sentence, a man rushes in and shouts. “They are here again!” Everyone in the bar suddenly gets up and runs outside. Even the bar keep. Fendrael and the group looks at each other and rushes out the door as well. All of a sudden Fendrael sees a huge grey blob moving in an arc towards them. Without realising what his happening, he instinctively senses danger. His eyes starts to glow and everything slows down. While being able to see everything faster than anyone else, he sees that it is a large boulder that is about to hit them. The boulder is only a few meters away. Fendrael looks at Corey and Henry. Its is too late. He cannot save them both. He can feel how his stamina is running out and panics. He cannot choose between them. He knows that there is only one way to save them both, and summons his sword. His stamina runs out the second he makes the swing. Trying to split the boulder in half. However, instead of a sword, a shield is being transformed around his left arm. The boulder smacks into it and breaks in dozens of pieces, flying everywhere. Everywhere expect around Fendrael. He looks at it with wide eyes and then back at Corey and Henry. Suddenly, he feels exhausted and collapses on the spot. Corey grabs him before he falls to the ground. She looks around, seeing pieces of the boulder smashed into nearby buildings. Corey and Henry understand what it means when Fendrael suddenly becomes fatigued. However, they don't have time to think about what happened and puts Fendrael on Henry´s back. “We need to see whats going on,” Corey says.