I learn a lot from "feedback", one of my readers said, "you have good plot, characters but not enough detail." Not enough detail is not but to much is just as bad too. I fear I'll put to much detail in my work, but I don't it seems. How do I put more detail in it my work? (Here's a little piece to see how I write or type) Tom laid on his belly on the middle of the couch, he is a fat cat. His smoky gray fur would lifted then slowly go down as he breathed through his nose. Every few second in his sleep, his claws would come out and go into the couch then he would sheath his claws again. Tom was needing the couch with his claws in his sleep. Any ideas, thank you.