What is a 'pleasant note?' with respect. Write it differently, and say something [more punchy?]. For me - it is all a bit of a word-washing. - plllllezzzznnndt.
That's a fair point. I was intending it as a contrast to her erratic behavior and affected speech prior to this line. She's asking a favor, so she comes off a bit more pleasant than she had been.
Well, your eloquence has really turned my thinking around on this one. You're right; I'm wrong. And ashamed.
You know what? I'm really offended that my thread has become so derailed. This is ubiquitous ridiculous. ETA:
“I need you to go, friends' houses.” There was a sinister tone to her squeal-howling. “Get my medicines.” [Hah hah hah] “Need you go to - my friend’s house.” Pleasant note, c# sharp diction. “Get my medicine.” [Heh] “I need you, go to, my friend...house.” Note, her voice: pleasant [voice pleasant]. “Get medicine.” [Hoh hoh] “You, go to my friend’s house.” There was a voice, pleasant in her note. “My medicine, get to!” [Hurrah] “Go house, get medicine.” [How]
