Recently I've been writing a story and my friends say they love the idea, but that's what friends are supposed to do right? This is the basics of what its about, does it seem interesting to you? I still have to work out the main plot and other details but right now its pretty much... A 14 year girl named Phena is the Captain of the Eagle Station. The Eagle Station is for teens who are Gifted, meaning they have some special gift such as controling fire or water, reading minds, or maybe they're an exceptional fighter. People who are Gifted are known to be so by their hair color, they have a base or natural color but streaks of unnatural colors. It takes place in the country of Mithalin where most people are wary, if not terrified of those with a Gift. King Darmor had no problem with the Gifted until one tried to attack him. He started to believe all Gifted were angry with him because of the way they are treated in his country. He decides he needs to capture them and try to stop them. Phena and the some of the others travel to his palace to convice him this is not the case. Along the way they run into trouble with his soldiers, but also make some new friends. Please let me know if this seems okay, or anything that could make it better. Thank you!