I'm choosing a rewrite and this is what I'm thinking of going with. An heiress was kidnapped at the age of 13 and sold into sexual slavery. She eventually escaped but never returned home too ashamed. Essentially her parents died and she's contacted by a mysterious half brother who found her after years of searching. Essentially he convinces her to come live and work for him. He does this because she's reluctant to go back to her old life and so he says "Tell you what if you come back you dont have to tell people who you are at least not until your ready. So how about for one year you come work for me live in the house and I'll pay you to cook, clean, run errands, and be my assistant. I'll also teach you how to run the business with me if you want. After a year or when ever you before that you can take what's rightfully yours or not but the offer to come back will always be on the table." Does this sound believable? Also is it a reasonable offer for someone trying to connect with a lost sibling to make? Essentially he's a world class detective and she becomes like his watson. My other proble is I don't really know what her job title would be. Essentially she starts out cooking, cleaning, running errands and later starts acting as an assistant. I don't really know what her job title is though.