1. morganjaimes

    morganjaimes New Member

    May 14, 2010
    Likes Received:

    Drum roll please...

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by morganjaimes, May 15, 2010.

    I just wanted to take a minute to thank my editor, publisher, and most importantly.... Sorry, just practicing!

    Hey ya'll,

    I am a newbie to the world of writing! I started my first novel, when I was laid off a year ago, and 'A frail New World', as it is titled, is a novel that explores the possibilities of government corruption in our newly expanding digital technology. It delivers an exacting punch in regards to the exploitation of our technological advances while exploring the frailties of human relationships. This technological thriller takes the reader deep into the nether regions of the internet, while bringing to the forefront, the love and compassion one man must pursue... in order to deal with the pain of his past.

    Anyways, that is my life at the moment... I am in the final editing stages, and will be listing various chapters, in hopes that ya'll will give me your critiques and impressions. I would also like to read your works as well, so I can learn from others!

    Thanks, Morgan Jaimes http://AfrailNewWorld.blogspot.com

    "Great minds often languish in obscurity, 'til fate sets them free!"
  2. Cogito

    Cogito Former Mod, Retired Supporter Contributor

    May 19, 2007
    Likes Received:
    Massachusetts, USA
    Hello Morgan, Welcome to the Writing Forums.

    Please read How to Use the Review Room before you post there. Posting your own writing for people to comment on should not be among the very first things you do here. It is worth taking the time to see what other people have done to improve their writing, and see if some of it applies to your writing as well. That is part of why we require members to review other members' work before posting their own for review. On the other hand, there are no restrictions, other than content and copyright rules, on showcasing your work in your member blog.

    Also, be aware that posting a piece of writing on any public site, including this one, will greatly diminish your chances of selling it for publication. Removing the writing later does not alter that fact - once posted, it is irreversibly considered published. So do not post anything more than a small excerpt of any piece you are planning to submit for publication.

    If you haven't explored the site yet, you should probably do so soon. Newcomers often gravitate to the Lounge, the Word Games, or the Review Room, but there is much more to be discovered if you poke in the corners. Remember to check out our FAQ as well, and be sure to read through the forum rules, too, to avoid any misunderstandings or hurt feelings. Respect for one another is our principal mandate.

    As for the Review Room, new joiners often wonder why we do things a bit differently on this site than on other writing sites. We emphasize constructive critique as a vital writing skill. Training your eye by reviewing other people's work helps you improve your own writing even before you present it for others to see. Therefore, we ask members to review other people's writing before posting work of their own. The Review Room forums on this site, therefore, are true workshops, not just a bulletin board for displaying your work (and on that note, please only post each item for review in one Review Room forum). Also, please use the same thread for all revisions and additional excerpts from the same piece of writing. See this post, Why Write Reviews Before Posting My Work? for more information.

    And while you're looking around, don't forget to check out our Weekly Short Story Contest and Weekly Poetry Contest. They actually run more than one week apiece, but any member may enter, and all members are urged to vote for their favorites.

    Enjoy your stay here, and have fun!
  3. Gigi_GNR

    Gigi_GNR Guys, come on. WAFFLE-O. Contributor

    Jul 25, 2009
    Likes Received:
    Milwaukee, WI
  4. hyperspace!

    hyperspace! New Member

    May 9, 2010
    Likes Received:
    Hey now. Rules 1 and 2. Respect them.



Share This Page