1. powelly52

    powelly52 New Member

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    feedback and criticism needed.

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by powelly52, Sep 8, 2013.

    Hello to everyone on the forum, and may i first thank you for clicking on my subject line. It suggests your the type of person i sorely need.


    My name is Mark, I am twenty-five and am in the early stages of a novel.

    I am attempting the snowflake method of writing.


    What I need is criticism on my style of writing... i have a few examples on a blog i recently started for this purpose.

    [link removed] ~ Wreybies

    Please read and leave honest feedback on my content, style, grammar... anything you find relevant.


    Thank you all for your time
    Mark
     
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  2. Wreybies

    Wreybies Thrice Retired Supporter Contributor

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    Mark, welcome to the forum. Please read through the Forum Rules where you will find the information concerning how our forum functions and our policy on off-site linking. :)

    Wrey
     
  3. GingerCoffee

    GingerCoffee Web Surfer Girl Contributor

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    Welcome to the forum but you'd do better to see how we do things here. Most forums don't like first posts that include a link and an invite to another site. Join our community first, critique a couple things for other people and you can post things in the Writer's Workshop here which we'll be happy to critique for you.
     

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