First thing that comes to your head

https://www.writingforums.org/showthread.php?t=9536
Here's the link.... and thank you!

 

Thanks - it might be a few hours before my review will appear - I usually take a bit of time when I do critique, and I'll be signing off shortly.

 

That's fine. I can wait! I'm heading out in a bit too. I'm sleeeeeepy!

 

I know, I know, my opinion isn't worth much. I'm new, I haven't posted one story for review yet, and all I like to do is play word games...but seriously, if you want an honest opinion I'll give it to you. And I'll tell you where you might be able to improve...

 

Cobra, I'll take advice from anyone willing to hand it out. Thank you for taking the time! The link is up there ^^^!

 

^__^ I just posted my review, Foxy. I hope you can find something helpful in it.

 

It is too early to be awake.

 

Foxy I am sooooo sorry darl. My net was playing up >< I'll make it up to you. I promise. I feel terrible now....

 

Arrggghhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! (Yup dealing with my family.)

 

<hugs>

I feel your pain. My family can be somewhat difficult....I avoid talking to them....I hide here lol

 

Which is exactly what I'm doing. Great minds blah blah blah (ok that actually made me laugh - thanks).

 

HAHAHA! What I find funny is you said great minds blah blah

I have a dark and disturbing mind...

glad i could help make you laugh, sounds like you damn well needed it too. Poor guy!

 

Nah getting better the laughing and the baby combined always win out over crazy family members.

 

yeah most definitely glad tis getting better

I have to go soon, have movies to watch. I am legend and somet else. Parents pick tonight >< ICK! I don't think they like my choices lol Saw...saw....saw and more saw lol

 

Saw is a great movie!!!!

Yea, I have to go soon too - that dead bolt won't hold back my family forever.

 

omg that made me laugh thanks

and I am glad you agree about Saw, cause all 4 rule and the next two shall as well hehe

 

Soldier through Wolfie...it'll all be over soon!!!...

This from the one who conceded defeat and is now dealing a slew of tedious details!!!....aggghhhh!!!

 

Hi chimmy and hope it gets better for ya

I'm off now to sleep and first email my loaf....before I forget to email him .....yikes!

 

Night Tor! ./hugsquish

Was lots of fun RPGing with you

 

Finally everything is done and over with!!

A great day spent with a great family...and now, some me time!!!

 

I survived the family without having to be arrested for murder.

 

hahaha...Glad you did Wolfie!!

Hello to You!

 

World-weary and looking for sanctuary...

Here seems nice.

*dozes*

 

Hey there GW! Get some sleep?

./hugsquish Chimface And Rumo

=DDD Hey everyone.

How was your days? (=

 

Hello Bick!! My day was fine!! Hope your day was as well.

Hello Mack!! Hope your day is getting off right!