Flame of the Crimson Rose Discussion

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  1. Lebby

    Lebby New Member

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    thats k man, no one but Nathan was really meant to see Calebs eyes glowing anyway :)
     
  2. Honorius

    Honorius Active Member

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    Well you guys won't die yet, just soon. And I probably won't let you actually die. Just be badly injured.

    You guys want to give Bob a proper burial... That so sweet. *Tear* I had never thought about that.


    Anyways, I'm going to get back to Susanna now. I've been ignoring her.

    Also, you all have a new objective. You now need to get as far away from the city as possible. You will not succeed, but you need to try your hardest.

    That is all.
     
  3. Lebby

    Lebby New Member

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    Is it ok if we get a nights rest b4 we set of? At teh warehouse.

    (I really love this warehouse)

    OOOO competition for Addison, with Cole.

    *hiisssssssssss

    Its On >: (

    :p
     
  4. yellowm&M

    yellowm&M Contributor Contributor

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    wow...
    my character has done nothing but sit there in shock crying....
    she must have some insane charisma ;)
     
  5. Lebby

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    Shes using the Bella Swan method of seduction! That saucy minx! *Changes name to edward*

    :)

    Yay I posted again :)

    Once again, its on Cole...
     
  6. yellowm&M

    yellowm&M Contributor Contributor

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    oh god...
    please don't compar Addison to Bella
    she is much cooler than Bella
    Bella doesn't have any personality and Addison most definately does


    oh and I justt realized I kind of took slight control of Cole in my post, sorry!! Is it ok hawken or should I just delete that part?
     
  7. Honorius

    Honorius Active Member

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    Um, Zigg, I really don't want to sound offensive, and don't take this personally, but...

    Your writing sort of sucks.

    You managed an outstanding four sentences, one of which was one word long. Please Please Please put more effort into your posts.
     
  8. Lebby

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    shes not like Bella, but she has taken a leaf out of her seduction manual lolz :)
     
  9. yellowm&M

    yellowm&M Contributor Contributor

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    I suppose I can sorta live with that lol
     
  10. Lebby

    Lebby New Member

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    Honor don't be so hard on Zigg! He's still getting into the groove of things!

    Remember when i first posted? (Chaaaaarlllliiieeeee) And Now look at me! well as much as you can through text on a computer screen.

    Yay i posted again!
     
  11. Honorius

    Honorius Active Member

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    This is different though. You just broke half our rules. Zigg just needs to focus on a well thought out and determined post.
     
  12. Lebby

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    hehehehehe just broke half your rules, lol.

    I suppose your right, Zigg will get better though, GO ZIGG!
     
  13. Cogito

    Cogito Former Mod, Retired Supporter Contributor

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    It's a writing forum. The RPG is supposed to be an opportunity to write extemporaneously, but you are still expected to try to write with clarity.
     
  14. Zigg

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    2. Avoid writing one-line posts or extremely long posts. A range of 40-300 words is good to shoot for.

    Point out others i broke.
     
  15. Lebby

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    Um Zigg i kind of ignored you last post, because it didnt make sense, whos the fast freak? And whys he gone?

    OMG! the almighty Cogito has spoken! Bow before his glory!
     
  16. Honorius

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    So please do your best to improve. That's what this place is for.

    Yeah... Zigg, the fast guy is the guy who just gave you all the rock, and then appeared dead and mutilated on top of the statue.

    Have you been paying attention?
     
  17. Lebby

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    Yay We Are getting out of the rain!!!!!!!!!!
     
  18. Honorius

    Honorius Active Member

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    Yep. Now, do you guys want some time to interact while in the van, or should I just fast forward us to the warehouse, where you guys can get a solid day of character interaction, maybe more, in?
     
  19. Evil Flamingo

    Evil Flamingo Banned Contributor

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    My character is annoyed, let's get a move on.
     
  20. Lebby

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    Yea plenty of time for character development at the warehouse.

    (Im thinking of getting married to the warehouse)
     
  21. Zigg

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    Skip to warehouse i say. About the fast freak - I got confused by everything.

    :-(
     
  22. yellowm&M

    yellowm&M Contributor Contributor

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    I vote warehouse! and character interaction!!

    I'll be minster for the marriage Lebby :)
     
  23. Lebby

    Lebby New Member

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    Yay!
    Hopefully, Honor, that warehouse DOES'NT get blown up while we sleep.

    And Zigg, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! Your still only writing one sentence posts!!!! You need to write more!! :)

    Post Honor! Lets get this show on the road!
     
  24. Honorius

    Honorius Active Member

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    I'm going!

    And Lebby, your power really is useless. But it was executed right. Although, I would be much more scared of Nathan.
     
  25. Evil Flamingo

    Evil Flamingo Banned Contributor

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    Fear me and obey!

    Haha, just kidding. My powers are waiting.
     

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