Anyone know any guidelines for fragments? I tend to use them a lot. I drop pronouns, possibly even subjects and I'm not sure if they work. Here's something from my work in progress - The scene is a fight in the dark - Ignoring Noir's continued protests he doubled up a fist and punched in the direction of Noir's head. Connected with a solid skull. Noir's cries turned into a yelp, but he hit him again. If you take out that second sentence it doesn't make any sense on its own. It only makes sense in the context. I heard someone say though that fragments should still make sense when they're taken out of their context. They should still contain a solid thought.