So I've been currently told that my MC's dialogue doesn't always quite match the narration from her thoughts, for it's from her point of view. I've always had trouble matching the two, and really getting in touch with my characters and how they speak, for I seem to just have this inner voice of my own that overpowers everything when writing. It's also quite difficult for me to stop narrating in the way I do, due to the fact I'm writing about a completely different planet and I'm trying to be all visual but I'm forgetting to make it HER descriptions, the way she would think of it. She's a very emotional character for me, but I just can't seem to channel that emotion and make her whole in thoughts and dialogue and make her truly believable. Any suggestions on how to do this without a ton of editing?