Hi, My name is Bruce from Vancouver Island on the west coast of Canada. I now have time to get to do some creative writing, rather than many years of business and government writing which is so structured and formal. I have 4 ideas for books, but this creative writing thing is new so looking for feedback. I have read and reviewed the site and so I think I would like some feedback on my writing. I have posted under Novels and it's called Father's Day, chapter 1. thanks, Bruce.