Hey, my name is James. I'm actually not sure why I'm coming onto these forums. I have tried getting my friends to look over the book I've written (will get into that in a second...lol), but no one seems to read it. I then decided to find somewhere that had people who weren't biased towards me to read some of my stuff. A little about myself: Never imagined myself writing anything...and do not plan on doing anything english-wise. I just know grammar very well...and these ideas just keep popping into my head. Lots of random ideas just pop up whenever I'm studying for my finals...lol Don't worry, I'm not posting the 27-30 chapter book I've written, but I do want some critique or advice on whether this would actually be a good book, whether my writing style is good, or whether i should give up on it (the book is the start of a 12 book series...again long story). I might throw out some other things like brainstorm ideas or other random things to see what people think. Anyway, before I drag this out too long, I'll start roaming around and see if there's anything I can comment on. Hopefully I can help someone somewhere in due time.