help me please

hi to all,am I correct in the punctuation?
1-Emily formerly,Mrs.Goyette caught Mr.Andless' sleeve.Where no on could see and managed;it briefly but urgently.
2-Joseph,who is Gordon's brother,is a guard on the second string.
3-Dearest,his voice broke;he could say no more.
4-Louis and then,she has it still something near to genius for making importable persons,places,and situations sound attractive.
5-Some of my courses for example:French ,and Biology demand a great deal of work outside the classroom.
6-I know-I said ,but that is not the real bed what happened to it.
7-his second novel published last year;was a great success.
8-outside;the car park was soon full.
9-D.R. Laurence man and myth.
10-John suddenly shouted look out;he was got a gun.
11-they want some time to chill out,after their exams.
12-The London Birmingham Train.
13-if the manger is attending,will she please notify the office?
14-this has caused the great deal of pain,both mental and physical.
15-the company has never in deed;never be profitable.
16-she may have seemed a good prime minister;nevertheless she failed to face the facts.
17-the following items were missing:a credit card,a driving licence and a watch.
please I need it today.

 

Before I do these, is this homework or some kind of assignment?

 

I won't correct anything that's homework for YOU to do - especially not if it's some sort of end-of-year test, exam, or finals. Please explain why you need it.

 

Exactly. I did them, and then got a bit worried.

 

Same here. I don't want to help anyone cheat.

 

Can I ask you something Lucy? Did you find some of the sentences impossible to understand? I found some of them almost impossible.

 

This is clearly a homework assignment. I'm closing the thread.

 

Meh you've beaten me too it.