Thank you for every one who helped with my dirty character problem, that was easily fixed once I learned how to. Now, I'm starting a new book, it's dark fantsy/horror/romance. I have to have areally hopeless, but sweet suitor for my M.C. everytime I try to make him all timid and hopeless, it makes him seem almost obnixously attachet(how I don't know). Everytime he gets the slightest bit less timid(best way to put it) he acts like a complete jerk, 1000% of the time. I'm normally very good at shaping characters, but I had to stop writing for a wile, and now I find my characterizations REALLY Weak, like sickiningly weak!!!