There is a guy in my writing class who is correcting everyone and being a snob about it as though he's surrounded by idiots; his actual words. Can anyone please find something, anything, wrong with these so we can put him in his place. Though, he is good, so there prob isn't anything wrong, just hoping. but here they are: 1. maconalum: since we are giving advice, you need a comma after "broaden", you probably didn't mean "dictation", delete the "a" before "more", insert a period after "stories", "proofread" is one word, and "writer's" should have an apostrophe. 2. Not condoning sucker punching anyone with a brick, but why would an adult, after hearing that a teen-aged boy had made a comment about him, walk out in the yard to confront him?