Hi all, I’m having trouble understanding the structure of my story. I’m wondering what the first plot point is.. Genre is mafia romance Dual POV male and female. Scene outline 1. The story begins with girl escaping an abusive boyfriend. GIRL POV (HOOK) ? (boyfriend will come back as a complication later) 2. Back ground on her police officer friend, giving her a contact for a ‘safe house’ and a new identity to escape. GIRL POV (SET UP) ? 3. Background that the cop has called on a favor he is owed and put the girl under the protection of a notorious crime network in Sydney. MALE POV (SET UP) ? 4. Back ground that the cop is on the syndicate payroll as an informant to the syndicate administration and to ignore and cover up their organised criminal activity. MALE POV (SET UP) 5. The syndicate underboss, is forced into protecting the girl in exchange for security and protection of assets. MALE POV (INCITING INCIDENT) ?? 6. Meanwhile we learn the girl is on a mission to find out what happened to her Father who’s been missing for ten years. GIRL POV (WANT/DESIRE) 7. Underboss accepts an offer to marry the Boss’s stepdaughter in exchange for the top job. (WANT/ DESIRE) 8. Girl makes the call to her ‘safehouse’ and she meets the underboss at the syndicate owned strip club where she gets a job behind the bar. (FIRST PLOT POINT / END OF ACT ONE) From here there are a host of complications but eventually they fall in love. The climax is where the male needs to make a choice between his agreement to marry the stepdaughter and the girl he has fallen in love with. The resolution is he goes back on his agreement and marries the girl instead. Is the first major plot point when the underboss accepts the girl into the syndicate? (similar to To Kill A Mockingbird where the first plot point was actually Atticus’s agreement to take on the case) or is this the inciting incident? Is the first plot point His agreement to marry the stepdaughter? Is the first plot point when the two meet for the first time? Because this really closes of the first act and opens the rest of the story. Is a romance almost always when the two meet? Any advice would be much appreciated. Thanks in advance.