I consider myself pretty decent at punctuation, in normal writing at least. Then I write this atrocity, which I also highly doubt is grammatical. How should I punctuate here? I just used commas for now. I played with dashes and stuff for a while, but I’m not that good at English punctuation (I don’t think we even use dashes in my language). This is the sentence, spoken by my character who has just been told to ask politely. “Dear mother, who is possibly, no not possibly, most definitely, the greatest mother in the whole wide world, no, not world, universe, could you, if it’s not too much of a bother, please, pretty please, bring me some ice-cream?” Thank you. Edit: Just saw that cold grave had posted a very similar question right below mine... I'd still like to get some opinions on this particular sentence though, if it's not too much trouble.