Hemingway six word story

Hmm....

I'm sorry. Really. I can't believe you.

Blurry vision. Can't hold it. Tears.

 

Did not look both ways. Squish.

 

Dull scissors. Bad hairstyle. Stylist strangled.

 

You alright? Yes. Ok, bye. NO.

 

You saved my life... You idiot!

 

hahah, yiikkkkesss

The most universal story that covers everythin, who knew it was only six words long!! lol

Here's my crack at it;

I do; what now? Sign here..

 

Good!

Hm...

I love you, I do. LIAR.


Cup of water, pills, will, swallow.


Bright flash. Blink, twice. Moment over.

 

I'm not sleepy! Really I'm no-awn*

 

She's dead. NO.NO. Yes....sorry.

 

I hate heights. Now I'm flying.

 

I caught your plague so quickly.

 

Hidden feelings, no one understands.

 

The shortest story, ends like this...

 

LOVE IT Piestein - so much said in so few words.

My attempt:


Her beloved pet was gone; and she never looked at Jake, or the toaster oven the same way again.

 

"...for I have sinned," he hissed.

 

This thread has taken quite a vacation... Rather than create a new one, I'll bring it back. I love Hemingway's style and his six word story; It is absolutely brilliant. Here is my first try at the six word story:

Sweaty hands; a longing gaze–silence.

 

Jagged breaths, smiles in the dark.

 

He gets killed off for real.

 

Voicemail: 1. Erased without a thought.

 

Tiny casket. Father eats a gun.

 

She awoke in someone else's sheets.

 

It was just another day, until....

 

Something happened that was really weird.

 

(Remember, the six word story is supposed to be a complete story, not merely a teaser or intro. The reader should have a decent sense of what happened and why, It is the pinnacle of flash fiction)

Childhood crush. Chance encounter. Elder wedding.

 

War: letter to wife on humvee.

or may be simply,

Letter to wife on a humvee.