Hey all! I'm a college senior with a LOVE for creative writing. I'm finishing up a fiction class and working on a short story. I'd love for someone to read it and give me feedback? I've not finished my own edit, but what I'm looking for is someone to tell me if I'm leaving out any needed details. Is there any character that you think I should write more about? It's 11 pages double spaced and I've been told it's a quick read. Thanks in advance for your help!