This is describing the Target in 'Wingball', the sport playing by Revants in my novel. I need help on being able to shorten it or make it sound more professional and easier to understand. Now Elthein was heading towards the first Target. He once again marvelled at how clever the invention was, which Oraan, the village smith, had made. There were two thick wooden posts hammered into the ground, about 2 metres apart. At the top of the posts, a thin steel bar was hammered into the side of each of them, creating the shape of a doorway. In the middle of the steel bar, was a loose ring hanging around it. Hanging from the ring was a length of rope half a metre long, with a leather ball about two times the size of an average persons head attached to the end of it. Elthein was required to make sure that the leather ball hanging from the rope was able to swing around the horizontal bar easily. This was because, in order to score, you would have to throw or hit the leather ball, which the game is played with, into the hanging ball on the rope. If the ball swings right over the horizontal bar, one point is scored. It isn’t the easiest thing to do, which is why the game requires a lot of skill and strength.