Hi all, I'm writing a guide book, and the biggest problem I'm seeing when I read over what I've written is being mealy mouthed. I don't seem to be good at stating things concisely and keeping the word-to-information ratio low. For instance, I've just recently combed through the whole thing to delete dozens of unnecessary words like "generally", "usually", "just", "sometimes" when they're not needed; as well as looking for missing contractions ("you will have" versus "you'll have"); and even at the paragraph level where I'll blather my way through a piece of advice that could be done much more concisely. Does anyone know of any good learning resources to help me work on this? Or any word processing tools that and review over my book and signal or recommend changes to me? Thanks!