How to describe appearances

Discussion in 'Character Development' started by Captain Cat, Oct 10, 2018.

  1. Cave Troll

    Cave Troll It's Coffee O'clock everywhere. Contributor

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    Well some little touches like that add to characterization.
    Now spending a scene in front of the mirror, to describe
    all of him physically would be a big no no. :)
     
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    I don't really agree. I think that if you give the reader juuust enough, you're going to leave them with a rather bland world.

    Maybe it only matters that Jimmy wears sneakers that are not in pristine condition. But once the sneakers are onstage, I think that it can be useful to add a detail that makes them specific.
     
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    Oscar Leigh Inexplicable lunch fiend Contributor

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    But as you got at with the emotional connection thing, there are different ways to he relevant or interesting and if everything was only of the most immediate relevance it would feel more like a script than an interesting novel, and even scripts include some extra colour.
     
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