Real quick, I wanted to say hello. I am new to the forums. I don't know how much I can help because I am very new to learning proper grammar and writing. I hope in the future I will be more help. I can't figure out how to properly write a conversation/quote into a sentence. I would love your opinion on the following sentence. Sentence: Sure, you can over simplify things and say "Take a break when you are stressed out before things become too intense." This can work in theory but people often need more direct instruction to achieve this. Is that written correctly?