Hi all, obviously new here. Mostly here because I have a paper I need to get edited that might determine the remainder of my college career. I've also been looking around the site and there are some very talented writers here! Don't know if this is allowed in the Introductions section, but there is very low traffic in the section I posted my essay so here is a link if anybody wants to take a look see and give me some critique. <link removed, along with the post> Thanks for any help and have a happy Thanksgiving!