Thanks for taking the time to have a read. I have two titles for the script and I'd also like help deciding which one is better. I know the title doesn't really matter that much at least not until I'm nearing the end, but I like to come up with a script that holds relevance with the story and get it out of the way first. BOOM! Headshot! or No, I Was Mom's Favorite! Genre: Action-Comedy Logline: A 28 year old FBI Agent and his 21 year old estranged ex-soldier/video gamer brother, must protect their deceased friend's ex-girlfriend and her 14 year old sister, from government agents who have accidentally locked a dangerous secret into the young girls head and if it ever got released it could potentially damage the government. Think of it as a hybrid of Chuck and Lethal Weapon.
Eh....I'm not feeling either of the names. You should probably write it and then come up with a name. As for the premise, yeah, I could see it. Although, honestly, it looks like it has more potential as a dark drama sort of thing than a comedy.
I agree that you should definitely write it first. Even if you have a plot in mind, plots can often change because writers can have lots of new ideas along the way. If you spend a long time deciding on a title now, if could be meaningless by the time you've finished writing it.
The only title that sounds remotely interesting (to me) is "Headshot." I could definitely see this story being action/comedy. Write it. Then we'll tell you if it's a good idea or not.
