how do you go about including HUMOUR in writing? I usually start with my character personalities and their names for example. Abigail is an ever so sweet tempered lady. She would agree to play all sorts of outdoors games as long as she gets to win everytime. Losing is not her best friend and oh she always like to be the talk of the tea parties she organises after the activities are finished. Her entourage call her lady Winnity. Does Humour come across in this little passage? Or How else would you do it?