I didn't see any other place to post this, so I hope this is the right place. This is an excerpt from a fanfiction I'm writing: I need help with either finding another word for cut or rephrasing the bold words entirely. Or does it sound fine the way it is?
and with a victorious war cry, he..... ripped it from its roots crushed it into a pulp of rotting earth tore it from the ground hacked it away from its stem like severing a limb
...war cry, he tore it from the ground. Or keep the first phrasing. Choose whatever you find quick, simple, and adequate.
Honestly, I don't mind 'cut it down' at all. Though maybe 'painstakingly sprayed it with a generic glyphosate, fretting all the while that a branded product might have been a better bet, and stood about for six days waiting for it to take effect.'
I personal like JimFlagg's idea. He reaped it like Death him self. Although I wouldn't use it, I liked the hummor in art's comment.