I'm stuck in an empty room

Xoic · Aug 28, 2022

AlyceOfLegend said: ↑

Taking inspiration from the Twilight Zone: A Character In Search Of An Exit
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Or from Pink Floyd: "There must have been a door there in the wall when I came in... "

Homer Potvin · Aug 28, 2022

Xoic said: ↑

Or from Pink Floyd: "There must have been a door there in the wall when I came in... "
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Craaaazyyyy... toys in the attic he is craaaazyyyy... certainly gone fishing....

Louanne Learning · Aug 29, 2022

The Black Hole

SapereAude · Sep 5, 2022

Thundair said: ↑

A vacious room.
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Just came back to this thread.

Is "vacious" even a word?

SapereAude · Sep 5, 2022

deadrats said: ↑

Thanks for all the help, guys. For some reason, I sort of feel like I should keep the "in." I want to keep the title of this story simple and clear. The story itself is a little complex and unconventional so I don't want any bells and whistles with the title. But the "in" seems to give it a little something, maybe. I'm pretty pleased with how the story has come out. I'm going to do a few more rounds of edits before doing anything with it. So, I do have some more time to think over the title. Man, titles are so hard for me. Maybe the whole idea of titling the story "In the Empty Room" is stupid. Maybe I'm being too generic. It's a story about murder, deceit, hunger, and greed. I was thinking a simple title would make for a good contrast. Okay, now I'm not sure of anything. I'm thinking I need another return back to the drawing board.
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How about "The Room"?

NWilliams · Sep 6, 2022

K.I.S.S.

"The Empty Room"

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