Improving myself as a writer

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  1. JetBlackGT

    JetBlackGT Senior Member

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    Like everyone says.

    Write.

    The thing that will make you the best writer (or anything else in the world!) is practice. Practice, practice. And watching others do it (reading).

    My biggest cheat is using actual people as models for my characters. That way, when I put them together, I already know how they will interact! Like a dream; every character in your dream is really you. That way you know that the parts of your characters that make them special really came from you but the solid, underlying block that is who that character really *is* is the person upon whom they are modeled. Use your family, your friends, teammates, lovers, etc.. It makes the writing process go very smoothly!
     
  2. mammamaia

    mammamaia nit-picker-in-chief Contributor

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    simply continuing to write will not make anyone a better writer, because unless they do something to improve their writing, they'll only be committing the same mistakes over and over again, thus making it ever harder to break the habit...

    to improve your writing, don't just keep writing... most importantly, you need to read and study the works of the best writers... constantly...

    and seek the advice of pros on what you need to improve in your writing...
     
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  3. GHarrison

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    Read and write and obsess. Let embryonic stories develop in your mind and give birth to them when you can no longer contain them.

    ...And listen to everything mammamia says... :D She tends to be write.
     
  4. MrWisp

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    Read. A lot. It's like immersing yourself in another language. The more great writing you read, the easier it will be not only to recognize what direction you'd like to take your own writing, but also to find shortcomings in your own works.
     
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  5. Keitsumah

    Keitsumah The Dream-Walker Contributor

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    Originally i started just writing the same scene over and over again (i had no idea where to take it then) a girl waiting under a tree for her brother -what the tree looked like, the basket, the flute in her hand, etc. It took quite a long time for me to finally start an actual story with it - and even then i had no idea where it was headed (now after three years, i finally do and it was SO worth it!)

    Now, i don't mean to advertize the RP side of the forum, but we do a lot of different things there you may be interested in trying. you get to create your own original character based on a template (character making practice) as well as experiment with whatever POV you like. And that's only the beginning. Pretty much the Rp forum is a huge playground for you to practice in, and i am happy i joined it. The people there are warm and friendly, so you can ask lots of questions even when the games get overwhelming at times (or, say, in a time of personal need of comfort like i did just today). Aside from reading, participating in a huge story with just your one character alongside with many others is a very good experience i should think.

    Well, i'm not gonna bother saying anything more, but if you want to know just what I'm talking about just go and look! at least with the RP forum you don't have to fret about plots like in a normal book yet.

    One step at a time...
     
  6. mammamaia

    mammamaia nit-picker-in-chief Contributor

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    RP?... as in RPG?... or something other?
     
  7. Cogito

    Cogito Former Mod, Retired Supporter Contributor

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    Do you expect t find the answers in one quick thread? To even one of these questions?

    There are many, many threads on this site addressing EACH of these questions. Start reading, and start practicing. Meanwhile, acquire and read lots of good fiction, in as many genres and by as many authors as you can manage.

    Expect to spend considerable time and effort on this, Nothing worthwhile is easy.
     
  8. anniede

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    To me, there are two steps to improving your writing:
    1) Write
    2) Read

    Write --> Write short stories. Write novels. Write flash fiction. Heck, you can even write jingles and descriptive bits on the inside of cereal boxes. The important thing is that you WRITE! As they say - "Practice makes perfect!"

    Read --> They say that the best writers are ones who read a lot --> fiction and non-fiction, classics and current bestsellers, magazines and websites. The more information and "good text" you can feed into your brain (or muse), the better your output will be.

    For example, I always have 3 types of books I'm reading at any given time - 1) fiction book (right now, I'm reading a Sherlock Holmes steampunk novel), 2) non-fiction book (current one is biographical "Just a Geek"), and 3) a book on writing (I'm currently working my way through the "Structuring your Novel" ebook by KM Weiland)

    Oh, and don't even get me started on the stack of magazines by my bed or all the blogs I have in my Blog Reader. If I'm not writing, I'm usually reading... ;-)

    Anne
     
  9. mrieder79

    mrieder79 Probably not a ground squirrel Contributor

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    I'm also a very new writer. Some of the best advice I received was not to be afraid to write poorly. It gave me the freedom to simply write and develop my abilities without agonizing over every sentence.

    Other good advice was, when working on a piece, to get through the draft and get my ideas down and then go back and revise.

    And of course--read, read, read and write, write, write.
     
  10. mammamaia

    mammamaia nit-picker-in-chief Contributor

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    reading must come first... can anyone design and build a car, or a house, if they haven't studied the real thing constantly, for a good long while?
     
  11. MrIthil

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    It is very simple. There is no 'magical key' to becoming a skilled writer. Every skilled writer does these things:

    1. Write a lot
    2. Read a lot
    3. Do not settle for any less than your best when working
    4. Be persistent in your submissions
    5. Take the good with the bad

    That's all there is to it. Bounce your ideas off of your friends, family, hell, if you can find any ''critique groups'' to work with, go right ahead. Some people will criticize you just to criticize you. Don't take any notice of those people.
     
  12. Smitty91

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    As I'm sure has already been stated, reading is your best means of learning how to write well. Read those who have left their mark on the literary world and see what they did well and what they didn't do well. Base your writing on what you read. Reading will [usually] help you improve your writing without you realizing it. If you're writing for children, I recommend someone like Marc Brown or J.K. Rowling. If you're writing for adults, then I suggest someone like James Patterson or Stephen King. There are also people you can pay to serve as your writing coach, but be warned: this can cost a good deal of money. Don't invest in a writing coach unless you have enough money to pay them and your monthly bills. Otherwise you won't be able to pay one or the other.
     
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    George RR Martin (author of the Game of Thrones books) answers this question aswell: http://www.georgerrmartin.com/for-fans/faq/ (he basicly says what everyone has been saying: read, read, read and write everyday)

    EDIT: I wonder if browsing the web could be considered reading?
     
  14. JetBlackGT

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    And edit the living snot out of your work. Edit, edit, edit!

    Edit your forum posts too ;-) In the same way people assume a writer is stupid or deeply uneducated, if their writing is filled with spelling and grammar errors, people will think you are a freaking genius if your writing is excellent.

    In my experience, I have found there is no need to correct their erroneous conclusion leaps. :)
     
  15. Keitsumah

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    It's called Role Play now but yes.
     
  16. Whedonesque

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    Try to be objective when reading your own work. Visualise yourself in a bookshop, idly flicking through books. You open one and read whatever you've just written - except now you have no prior knowledge of the characters, no investment in reading any more. Would you want to keep reading, in that situation? Would you buy the book? Edit it until you would.
     
  17. LeighAnn

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    There are a few things we recommend in our critique group for new writers looking to improve their skills (and since we're a critique group filled with published writers, we get approached by new writers a lot). I'll give you the basic list we discuss.
    • Read. A lot. I read between 100 and 150 books a year. You don't have to read that much, but you do have to read. And you have to read a wide variety of books. Sticking to one genre is not a good idea.
    • Write. A lot. I write just over 1 million words a year (only about half of them publishable). Write every day. Not everything will be gold. But if you write enough, something eventually will be.
    • Edit your own work. Go over it and improve it at least three times.
    • Have it edited by someone who can show you what you're doing wrong. We get a lot of objections to this one, especially from newbie writers who know everything, but it really does make a difference.
    • Join a critique group. A good one where people actually give decent feedback. A group where everyone just pats each other on the back is no help at all.
    • And finally... take a class. Find a class taught by writers who can teach that focuses on the kind of writing you'd like to do. Not all writers can teach, so watch out for that. Also watch out for classes taught by writers who aren't actually writers. If they can't point you to something they've written, find a different class. Our local university offers an entire series of classes for writers. It's not the only one, so look around.
     
  18. AlyHomewood

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    I can't say that I'm great at practicing my writing, because at the moment studying so that I can get a job gets in the way. But I found a quote when I looked up about writing practice once (I was trying to work out what would be good practice, not that my research helped):

    "Sometimes you get the handsome prince and sometimes you get the frog. The point is, no matter what, you turn up at the pond." Basically, you aren't going to get anything good if you don't write, but not everything you write will be good either. Reading that helped me accept my less than ideal writing.
     
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    I'd say start by writing something that interests you.

    Have you got a story in mind? A character or two? A setting or a story idea? Dig in, start writing as best you can. Don't worry about what other people are going to think of it. Don't worry about writing 'do's and don't's' at this stage. Write honestly, and try to make the story itself your focus, not your writing style.

    Take your time and bring it to life. Do whatever it takes to make us care deeply for your characters and their story. Let us see them doing things. Let us hear them talk to each other. Let us meet them and learn their quirks the way you would meet any new person. You observe what a stranger is like, don't you? They don't come with a set of character traits plastered across their forehead. You learn what they are like by paying attention to what they do and what they say. Write what you see them doing, think about why they are doing it, and they'll quickly become real people to you.

    Don't worry about whether your word choice and grammar are perfect during a first draft, or worry whether your subject matter is what everybody wants to read, or anything like that. Don't worry about being sentimental, stupid or anything else. Just get it down—all down—in a way that pleases you.

    One little trick to break the writing 'ice' is to pretend you're telling the story to somebody you know very well. You don't have to actually show this person anything, but just pretend you are telling it to them right now. This should be somebody who shares your interests and isn't a harsh judge. In fact if this person thinks you're the best thing since sliced bread, so much the better! (Your grannie, your little sister, your best friend) Knowing they are hanging on your every word will give you confidence, AND develop your voice as well.

    "Learning to Write" is a wonderful ambition, but unless there's a 'why' behind it, it's an empty exercise. It's kind of like saying 'I want to play the guitar, but I don't really care for music.' You can learn the mechanics, but if the soul isn't there to start with, it's not going to be much fun for either you or your readers. You need to have a story to tell.

    After you've finished and edited the first draft of your story, to a state that pleases you, THEN is the time to get it out there. Either on this forum, if it's a short piece, or give it to somebody you trust to have a look at it. See what happens. Be prepared to listen and make changes that seem sensible to you. If you can leave a time gap between finishing and giving it to people, so much the better. You'll be more inclined to look at it objectively, and take what other people say about it on board.

    If your reader wants to discuss your characters and what happens in your story, you know you've got them. If all they do is talk about the quality of your writing, you probably don't. Don't worry. It happens to everybody. Just keep getting feedback, and work from there.

    The most important thing? Write it. Have an idea and write it. Don't worry about it. Write it. Give yourself something to work with. Once you've done that, you can make it better.

    Good luck. Writing is wonderful, and a long learning curve. I'm sure you'll enjoy yourself.
     
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    mrieder79 Probably not a ground squirrel Contributor

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    I write 1,000 words a day minimum and spend a minimum of 90 minutes a day reading. I have read On Writing by Steven King. Are there any other suggestions the more experiences writers have to improve the quality of my writing?
     
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    You need feedback. I don't mean feedback where people tell you everything you did wrong and how they themselves would have written it, but feedback from other people as far as whether what you have written makes sense, is confusing, is boring, etc. Writing in a vacuum isn't completely helpful. You need to see whether you've really incorporated what you've learned from reading and writing. You need to know whether what you think you've communicated is really what is coming across.
     
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    As much as this may be a little annoying, time plays a factor in this as well. My writing has improved tremendously over the past year, and although I'm sure it will slow down, I will not cease to improve, even when I'm 60. There will always be something new to learn.

    I suggest you have a look at the ways other writers write. You may not like most of the methods, but one small thing that they do you can apply to your own writing, and it should improve. It's all a matter of refining. :)
     
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    You need reading experience too. Try to imagine someone building a chair without knowing how the chair looks like, what are the minimum requirements for an object to be called a chair, and how many different shapes can a chair have! So taking a break from writing to go to a library: that's a good way to widen your perspectives.

    And ditch King: at least read what's available online when it comes to narrative techniques, voices, scenes, etc. A lot of great material is available nowadays without $$$. And even a How-to-write book might come in handy (others on this forum might disagree, but I'd say keep those books close, but not closer than a thesaurus: people tend to become religiously bound to them, as if they can resolve all issues and problems).

    And yeah, as Liz says: find feedback. At least a friend. Or your mother, for starts :p
     
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    Read more than one 'how to write' book. You don't need to read every word, but writing advice is quite variable and you might fine different jewels in different author's words.

    Definitely one needs feedback, be it here, a critique group, or a beta reader. There are so many things one cannot see on their own pages that other readers will spot. The writer has so many more details of the story than get on the page, you need another reader without all that extra info to read your work. They can tell you if the story was clear or confusing, boring or interesting, but also little details like, I thought that character was female then he turned out to be male.
     
  25. mammamaia

    mammamaia nit-picker-in-chief Contributor

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    stop reading how-to books and start a constant reading diet of the best-written works by writers of what it is you want to write... plus the best-written works in other genres, just to get a sense of what good writing looks/reads/feels like...

    that's the best way to learn how to improve your own writing... by seeing how it's done by the best in the business... and 'best' does not = 'most popular'... king isn't even a very good writer, in a literary sense, he's just popular among readers who don't care if he's good or not, because they like the stories he tells...
     
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